Anizza

14/02/11

Final Thoughts

Poetry has change my thoughts on it about that it is boring or bad. It make us know that poetry is everything that we didn't know. Many people like poetry's now because they have understand what is poetry really are. I can't tell about the performances because i wasn't here. So, from now on I like poetry.

4/1/11

Poetry

I find poetry hard because some of the poetry ends with words that rhyme and make sense to the poetry. Some people changed the story to poetry the story is going to be different because of the rhymes. But as I know some poetry doesn't rhymes. Thats why I don't really like poetry because they are so confusing. I don't find poetry boring. What I like about poetry is rhymes.

06/01/11

I don't hate poetry it just that i learn anything what i learn. So i don't really care about hating it or not hating it.

10/01/11

What I think about the poetry Limbo By Edward Kamau Brathwaite is that they got lots of hidden meanings which people don't know. The poem is about the black people being tortured by the white people on the ship (that's what I know). I don't really know what they trying to say when I first time read it. It describes Hell by saying " Knees spread wide and the dark ground is under me" and Heaven which is " Out of the dark and the dumb god is raising me".

27/01/11

Reflection on Poetry

I achieved the learning intention well because I know why theres poetry in our world and read poetry without any help. I really like poetry now because now i know lots about poetry. The thing i don't know about poetry is the type of poetry there are. That poetry has their own rules thats the thing i like about poetry's.

__What I thought by: Unknown 06/01/11__
I thought a thought. But the thought I thought wasn't the thought I thought I thought. If the thought I thought I thought had been the thought I thought, I wouldn't have thought so much.


 * Comment: I like this poem because its weird that they say "//but the thought I thought wasn't the thought I thought I thought.//" So I was thinking what does this person thinking if that person is not thinking what he/she thinking.**


 * Kacha papaya pacca papaya**

**Kacha papaya pacca papaya.**
= Haiku = 9/01/11
 * Comment: I like this one because its funny and complicated to say it fast. I wonder what does it means. It keep saying " //Kacha papaya pacca papaya//" **
 * and when you want to say it fast you will messed up at the papaya part (most of people will).**

Login incorrect. Only perfect spellers may enter this system.

- Jason Axley


 * Comment: I like this haiku because this haiku tells us to spell or password or username correctly. That only perfect spellers can enter this system. Lots of people spells incorrectly thats why they say " Only perfect spellers may enter this system".**

=__ Haiku By - Roger McGough 9/01/11 __=

Snowman in a field listening to the raindrops wishing him a farewell


 * Comment: I like this haiku because it is true for people wishing a farewell to snowmans that melts and won't come back again and will come again next yea**r.

= = = Free Verse =

__By : Arianna Ioshnowsky__
it's funny how hello is always accompanied with goodbye  it's funny how good memories can start to make you cry  it's funny how forever never seems to last  it's funny how much you'd lose if you forgot about your past  it's funny how “friends” can just leave when you are down  it's funny how when you need someone they never are around  it's funny how people change and think they're so much better  it's funny how many lies are packed into one “love letter”  it's funny how one night can contain so much regret  it's funny how you can forgive but not forget  it's funny how ironic life turns out to be  but the funniest part of all, is none of thats funny to me


 * Comment: I like this poem i like the last part which is "but the funniest part of all, is none of thats funny to me" because its weird they say its funny but its not funny.. Its true that "good memories can start to make you cry" because it happen to me and made me sad. For example: When you to school and you made a good memories and then you're father got a work in other countries you have to go to a new school. **

=<span style="font-size: 1.4em; margin: 0px; padding-bottom: 0px; padding-left: 0px; padding-right: 0px; padding-top: 5px;">** It's the Music ** = <span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;">Do you hear it <span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;">Its the pounding of your heart <span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;">The thump of your foot hitting the pavement <span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;">Its the rythym <span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;">Its the song in your head <span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;">That tune your whistling <span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;">The jingle on the TV <span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;">Its the music <span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;">Its the rap kicking with the subs <span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;">The rock that show you how to stick it to the man <span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;">The blues with that soul <span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;">Its the music <span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;">What is it <span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;">Its the music <span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;">The heartbeat of the world <span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;">The rythym that brings us together <span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;">The only universally understood language <span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;">Its the happiness <span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;">The sorrow, <span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;">The guidance, <span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;">The inspiration <span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;">Its the music <span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;">It lives in us all <span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;">Its the music <span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;">The power <span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;">The Life.

**//Comment: I extremely like this poem because it describes my feelings to music! I like this part "<span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal;">Do you hear it //** **//<span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal;">Its the pounding of your heart " and this part//** **//"<span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal;">Its the happiness //** **//<span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal;">The sorrow, //**  **//<span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal;">The guidance, //**  **//<span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal;">The inspiration //**  **//<span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal;">Its the music //** **//<span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal;">It lives in us all //** **//<span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal;">Its the music //** **//<span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal;">The power //** **//<span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal;">The Life. "//** **//It lighten up my feelings to music alot!//**

= Humorous =

<span style="font-family: Verdana,Geneva,Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif; line-height: normal;"> **Yes! No! 09/01/11**


 * "My turn signal wasn’t working,**
 * So I asked for help from a friend.**
 * "Stand behind the car," I said.**
 * "Let’s get this problem to end."**


 * "When I turn the signal on,**
 * If it’s working, let me know."**
 * I hit the blinker and then I heard:**
 * "Yes! No! Yes! No! Yes! No!**
 * //By Joanna Fuchs//**


 * //Comment: I like this poem because its funny that this persons wants help by asking people if the blinker is ON but then when he turn on n the blinker says "Yes! No! Yes! No! so that person might be confused if the blinker is ON. This poem quite made me laugh but not that much..//**

= **Numberless!** = If all the numbers in the world were rubbed out, removed, taken away: I wouldn't know how old I was, I wouldn't know the time of day, I wouldn't know which bus to catch, I wouldn't know the number of goals I had scored, I wouldn't know how many scoops of ice cream I had, I wouldn't know my phone number, I wouldn't know the page on my reading book, I wouldn't know how tall I was, I wouldn't know how much I weighed, I wouldn't know how many sides there are in a hexagon, I wouldn't know how many days in the month, I won't be able to work my calculator. And I wouldn't be able to play hide-and-seek! But I would know, as far as my mum was concerned, I was still her NUMBER ONE! **Comment: I like this poem because it quite funny for me.. It says IF theres no number in this world but then suddenly it still knows number that the person is a number one for the person...** = Cinquains =

L ine up
search in panic for partner on the coach. An odd number - one left over Why me? **Comment: I like this poem because its like what I feel... Because every time I had to go with a partner theres no one to be with. It always been me.. Even in a school trip in the bus theres no one to sit with always alone because theres no partner to be with.**

**Cinquains**
And so As evening falls I close the curtains on The empty bed. And shadow creep Inside. **Comment: What I like about this poem is just like me I kinda scared and close the curtains because of the shadow. I like the part where they say " And shadow creep** **Inside."** **It makes the atmosphere a bit ghostly in the poem. That the part is the part where I feels about the ghostly feelings.** = = = Limerick =

Limerick by John Irwin
Date: 10/01/11

A limerick's cleverly versed - The second line rhymes with the first; The third one is short, The fourth's the same sort, And the last line is often the worst.

= =
 * Comment: This poem is quite funny. I chose this poem because I like the first sentence which is "A limerick's cleverly versed.** **The second line rhymes with the first;"**

=**Family Problems**=

I have a strange Auntie called Jean. She's quite tall and thin as a bean. On bright sunny days, When she's standing sideways, Aunt Jean cannot even be seen.

//John Kitching//


 * //Comment: I chose this poem because I kinda understand it a bit. I think it means about Jeans.. The person jean is tight as a bean. Which it says "//She's quite tall and thin as a bean.//" << there. That it describes in different ways.//**

=Raps=

<span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Verdana; font-size: large; line-height: normal;">**Cool Cat Mike Jubb**

<span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> Well I'm a cat with nine <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> And I'm in my prime  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> I'm a Casanova Cat  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> And I'm feline fine  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> I'm strollin' down the street  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> In my white slipper feet  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> Yeh, all the little lady cats  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> Are lookin' for a... treat  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> Because I got style  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> I got a naughty smile  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> I'm gonna cross this street  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> In just a little while  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> to be with you  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> to be with you  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> to be with you  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> to be with  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> You got grace  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> You got a lickable face  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> I'm gonna love ya and leave ya  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> And you'll never find a trace  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> Because I'm on my own  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> I like to be alone  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> I'm just a swingin', strollin'  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> Rollin' stone  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> But it's your lucky day  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> I'm gonna pass your way  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> I can spare a little lovin'  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> If you wanna stop and  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> play with me  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> play with me  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> play with me  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> play with  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> Meeeeow my  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> I got a twinklin' eye  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> I'm gonna cross this street  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> So don't you be too shy  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> But what's this I see  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> Comin' straight at me  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> It's a crazy car driver  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> Tryin' to make me flee  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> So I look up slow  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> Just to let the man know  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> That I don't go any faster  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> Than I really wanna. . . <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> X X X X X X X X X X X  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> Well I'm a cat with eight  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> I guess he couldn't wait  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> But I'm lookin' good  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> And I'm feline great! <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> Comment: I like this poem because its talking about cats. The poem is about the cat strollin' on the streets alone. " Well I'm a cat with nine  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> And I'm in my prime  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> I'm a Casanova Cat  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> And I'm feline fine  <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> I'm strollin' down the street    In my white slipper feet " <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> <span style="display: block; font-family: Verdana,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; margin-right: 0px;"> I like the way they say "In my white slipper feet" because it telling us the cat has a white feet.

Song: Baby By: Justin Bieber

<span style="font-family: arial,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal;">Yeah I Am 16 <span style="font-family: arial,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal;"> And I Thought You Would Be Mine <span style="font-family: arial,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal;"> I used to tweet you text you and call you <span style="font-family: arial,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal;"> and hit you on facebook all the time <span style="font-family: arial,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal;"> Yeah But Now Your Gone <span style="font-family: arial,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal;"> So far gone i cant even find you <span style="font-family: arial,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal;"> you know that feeling when you leave your love <span style="font-family: arial,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal;"> right behind you <span style="font-family: arial,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal;"> cant belive that you did me wrong <span style="font-family: arial,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal;"> we were on Ichat all night long <span style="font-family: arial,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal;"> listinin' to our favourite song <span style="font-family: arial,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal;"> she was wrong <span style="font-family: arial,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal;"> now im gone <span style="font-family: arial,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal;"> i thought i loved her <span style="font-family: arial,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal;"> never put no one above her <span style="font-family: arial,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal;"> yeas she was my lover <span style="font-family: arial,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal;"> but now on to another

<span style="font-family: arial,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;">Comment: I love this rap/poem because it just like me I went to facebook, tweeting all the time. This poem is about a guy who like to tweet and facebooking the girl and the girl was he's lover. The rap describes the singer because he is 16 year old. I like the part he say "Yeah I Am 16 <span style="font-family: arial,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal;">And I Thought You Would Be Mine <span style="font-family: arial,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal;"> I used to tweet you text you and call you <span style="font-family: arial,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal;"> and hit you on facebook all the time <span style="font-family: arial,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal; margin: 0px; padding: 0px;">Yeah But Now Your Gone" AND "<span style="font-family: arial,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal;">we were on Ichat all night long  <span style="font-family: arial,sans-serif; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal;">listinin' to our favourite song " Because it sounds like the person really loves the girl which the person keep talking to her until late night.

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=Sonnet=

I grew today..

I grew today; I think I grew an inch. My secret is, I eat my spinach greens. I season them with salt, but just a pinch, And then sometimes I eat my beans. I grew today; I think I grew a foot. I drink my milk to make my bones grow long. My rule has always been, quite simply put: Drink milk, drink milk, drink milk, it’s never wrong! I grew today; I think I grew a yard, I think because the exercise I do. I swim. I bike. I run. I’m training hard. I wonder one day what I’ll grow into. I grew today; I think I grew mile: That is, of course, if you can count my smile.

And then sometimes I eat my beans."
Which tells us the person only grows up by eating beans.

=sonnet 18= =by: William Shakespeare=

HALL I compare thee to a summer's day?Thou art more lovely and more temperate.Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,And summer's lease hath all too short a date.Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,And often is his gold complexion dimmed;And every fair from fair sometime declines,By chance, or nature's changing course, untrimmed:But thy eternal summer shall not fadeNor lose possession of that fair thou ow'st,Nor shall Death brag thou wand'rest in his shadeWhen in eternal lines to time thou grow'st.So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.

Comment: I chose this poem because it makes me relaxed and calmed. It makes me calmed by the word "winds" and "heaven". The poem is about a person wanting his friends to know a moment and tells that time will change of perfection. I've been thinking why does he put art as a example for temperature? I like the part where he say "Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,And summer's lease hath all too short a date.Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,"Because that's the part that makes the poem atmosphere is calm and relaxed.

= Ballad = GoodBye By: Brian Kamara

Write me a poem, A short love ballad, Whose words, though benign Will somewhat revivify The dying embers of my hope.

Play me a song, A slow love song Whose rhythm will make me sway And burn deep in my heart, To remind me then, That you are gone.

Hold my hand One last time, And let me feel your Soft, tender fingers in mine again. And bemoan the memory Of our broken unity.

Dance with me One last waltz. Beneath the moon’s amorous light, And the stars our final audience - Just you and me, again, Where we first met, And made our solemn vows.

Look into my eyes again Albeit for a little while, Let me marvel at their beauty One last time. And feel the same thing I know I’ll be yearning for.

Let my tears be. Let them stream down And wash away my pain, To numb a bleeding heart, Torn by the betrayal Of our last goodbye – Just let them be.

Comment: I chose this poem because it made me sad at this part:

"Let my tears be. Let them stream down And wash away my pain,  To numb a bleeding heart,  Torn by the betrayal  Of our last goodbye –  Just let them be."

//**The poem is about a person who had a hard time to leave the person and missed that person if the person leaves. The amusing part for me is:**//

//** "Play me a song, **// //** A slow love song **// //** Whose rhythm will make me sway **// //** And burn deep in my heart, **// //** To remind me then, **// //** That you are gone." **//

//** Because some people if they are sad they will open slow love song and reminds of the person. The poem made the atmosphere like sad which we knows from the word "Tears", "Pain", **//

= = Hamburgercheeseranchbacoburger

<span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal;">Sitting back taking a break <span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal;"> Staring at this stale piece of cake. <span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal;"> I ponder what to eat for lunch <span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal;"> Or shall I call it brunch?

<span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal;"> Tacos, pizza, or a salad <span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal;"> This is one crazy ballad. <span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal;"> I usually don't go out to eat <span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal;"> Walking that far would hurt my feet.

<span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal;"> Finally it has been decided <span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal;"> a <span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal;"> Hamburgercheeseranchbacoburger

<span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 20px; line-height: normal;"> Kilee Burton

Comment: I chose this poem because i got the same feelings of choosing food of what to eat. The poem is about a person whose having a break and wonder what to eat and ended up eating a <span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal;">Hamburgercheeseranchbacoburger. <span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal;"> "Tacos, pizza, or a salad <span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal;">This is one crazy ballad. <span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal;"> I usually don't go out to eat <span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal;">Walking that far would hurt my feet."

<span style="border-collapse: collapse; color: #333333; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14px; line-height: normal;">Is my favorite part of the poems because its talking food I like. The atmosphere or mood is trying to make people hungry.

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My Poem.


 * Why?**

I'm dying, Why? Because i'm lonely Why? Because people don't talk to me, Why? Because i'm not existed in people life, Why? Because i'm invisible, Why? Because i'm dead, Why? . ..


 * Candies Haiku!**

Candies are yummy! They can make people happy, When they taste tasty! = =

**Y** **our poems will be successfully as you goes.**
By:Anizza

The Kitchen

Everything in the kitchen went all **NING NANG NONG,**

The vacuum went **VOOOOM!,** The kettle went **SHHHHHHHH**, The frying pan went **Cricket cricket,** The spoon went all **CLING and CLANG!,** The blender went **GGGRRRRRR.** The boiling water went **BLOB BLOB BLOB.**

At the end of the day, The Kitchen went ___.

by:Anizza